Path

Your a diamond in the rough

A brand new ball of clay

You can become a work of art

But not if you stop half way

 

Now there’s nothing that can break (me)

No way that I can lose

If i’m fighting against a snake

There’s no way that I can snooze

 

The longest path that I’ll take

Is the one life sends me on

I can’t take a break

Until I’m dead and gone

 

Traveling on this lonely road

There’s a chance that I’ll explode

But it won’t be a setback for me

Because I’ll reach the end you see

 

This poem is about: 
Me
Our world

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Inspired by Kung Fu Fighting

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