Peanut Butter

by sneezegirl112

June 28, 2013

When peanut butter goes in my tummy it makes my heart say.... yummy

Now all the peanut butter has vanished

Left with none, I climb a mountain

Climb and climb I go so high

Oh i'm getting dizzy

I get to the top

Spot a rabbit

he's in a hurry

Really there or just a scurry?

Oh i'm getting very dizzy

Stomach pains growing

Maybe I'll just lay down

Don't bother waking me up

No, just let me dream

Dream about my yummy yummy peanut butter

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RebeccaYSPerezJun 28, 2013

<p>I really liked this poem. Its rhyme and bouncing pattern really made me stay with it. As well, as a VERY big Lewis Carroll fan, I absolutely loved the white rabbit referance. Thank you for sending this in!</p><p>Becca.</p>