Peers Vs. Servants

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As I see the faces of all my peers passing by day to day,

Faces that give off more than just what is hidden by the grey.

I wonder how in the world I will make that absolute difference.

Would a simple compliment pay the price,

Or a cliche statement, payement or inference?

 

Do I love them by choice or a simple act?

Love that can make them react.

I wonder how in the world I will make that impact.

Would a simple wave, smile or "hey" conceive a pact?

 

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