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Sat, 11/17/2012 - 00:38 -- gson

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43065
United States
40° 10' 27.354" N, 83° 5' 23.3484" W

Hush yourself, you mustn't talk so much.
Speak up, share your thoughts for once.

Calm down, you come off much too strong.
Move aside, I don't even know who you are.

You're ignorant, your confidence will be the end of you.
You're weak, find yourself some self-esteem.

You fool, your dreams were meant only to be dreams.
You're average, just another face in a million.

Either too much or too little, satisfaction does not exist.
Be less than perfect and people will criticize you,
but reach that perfection and people will hate you.

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