People

Location

People

Only human

We make mistakes

We mess up and try to fix it

Only then do we realize

That it's too late. 

Too Late.

We are people.

People of a hope that binds us.

Hope for futures

for us. 

We are human and we have hope. 

Comments

namjad

The poem seems to break itself down by the structures in a weird way, I can't pinpoint it but I like it! Especially hope being, lost, gained, and held on to. It's hypnotically repetitive. Good Job!

lewisk14

Thanks I could tell you what I did if you would like to know!

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741