People say
People say
I haven't grown
Spiritually yet
People say
I don't pray enough to God
People say
I am only rich in spirit
But when it comes to money
I am very poor
Also I don't care for money
I am very happy that
I am a poor man
My father made me a poor man
If I was a millionaire
I would have been
A slave of my money
But I have other things that are
More important than money
I have good health
And some good appetite
Also I eat very well
Yes I go to sleep early every night
So I can get a good night sleep
Yes I wake up before dawn
Outside still dark
When I walk at the boardwalk
Yes it is cold when I am outside
At that hour
I am also wearing my spring jacket
And at that hour there is nobody else
Than me
I hear the beautiful sound of the water
That I find it very soothing
Now the night was finally ending
And I am still walking at the board walk
And it is a new day
Suddenly it started to rain
Heavy
I return home
There I had a quick bite to eat now
Because I was hungry
Now I finally returned to my
Living room
I sat in front of my computer
And I started to work for couple hours
Today
Writing some new poems
Now I have lost power for 1 hour
There was nothing else I could do
I had a nap
At 5:00 PM the power came back
I continue were I left of
AT 8:00 PM
I stopped working
And I went to sleep
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Deeply personal autobiography about speaker's daily life and spiritual values.
SparseMeasureDense
Meditative pacing with repeated ideas about poverty, spirituality, morning routines.
DarkSentimentBright
Predominantly positive, contentment with simplicity despite external criticism.
StillEnergyExplosive
Quiet, gentle voice with minimal intensity; focuses on mundane daily observations.
MicroLengthEpic
Approximately 65 lines; falls in 31-60+ range.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Minimal figurative language; mostly direct declarative statements and plain description.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal voice; introspective and first-person throughout.
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