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People say I haven't grown Spiritually yet People say I don't pray enough to God People say I am only rich in spirit But when it comes to money I am very poor Also I don't care for money I am very happy that I am a poor man My father made me a poor man If I was a millionaire I would have been A slave of my money But I have other things that are More important than money I have good health And some good appetite Also I eat very well Yes I go to sleep early every night So I can get a good night sleep Yes I wake up before dawn Outside still dark When I walk at the boardwalk Yes it is cold when I am outside At that hour I am also wearing my spring jacket And at that hour there is nobody else Than me I hear the beautiful sound of the water That I find it very soothing Now the night was finally ending And I am still walking at the board walk And it is a new day Suddenly it started to rain Heavy I return home There I had a quick bite to eat now Because I was hungry Now I finally returned to my Living room I sat in front of my computer And I started to work for couple hours Today Writing some new poems Now I have lost power for 1 hour There was nothing else I could do I had a nap At 5:00 PM the power came back I continue were I left of AT 8:00 PM I stopped working And I went to sleep
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal autobiography about speaker's daily life and spiritual values.

SparseMeasureDense

Meditative pacing with repeated ideas about poverty, spirituality, morning routines.

DarkSentimentBright

Predominantly positive, contentment with simplicity despite external criticism.

StillEnergyExplosive

Quiet, gentle voice with minimal intensity; focuses on mundane daily observations.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 65 lines; falls in 31-60+ range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Minimal figurative language; mostly direct declarative statements and plain description.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; introspective and first-person throughout.

Free Versespiritualidentitynaturerepetitionpersonification

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