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Perfect Glass


Perfect glass shatters in my hands
A million pieces fall, never to be put back together
 
Glueing it, melting it, 
apologizing
as if words can make glass whole again
 
I hate that, I want the glass to be fixed so bad
Cutting up my hands picking up the pieces
Crying till I’m blue in the face
 
I feel too deeply 
Deeper than the cracks in the glass 
 
I think and think, till my eyes are shallow with life
Why can’t I fix it? Why did I say it?
 
I wish I could sew my mouth, stitch after stitch
My hands now scarred won’t re open
My heart, somehow whole, must stay quiet
Till nobody remembers my evil soul.
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal guilt and regret, grounded in concrete metaphor of broken glass

SparseMeasureDense

Dense emotional ideas compressed; guilt, self-harm, silence stacked rapidly

DarkSentimentBright

Deeply negative: self-hatred, regret, pain, despair throughout

StillEnergyExplosive

Intense emotional turbulence; fragmented pacing; urgent, restless voice

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 20-25 lines; falls in 16-30 range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Extended glass metaphor; mouth-sewing; deep cracks; shallow eyes; rich ornamentation

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric confessional voice; internal self-examination and remorse

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