The Perfect View
High above the clouds we overlooked the island,
On the sacred and mighty peak of Mauna Kea.
Blue clouds for miles and the tip of a mountain in the distance;
The perfect view.
Never in my life have I felt so small.
On the top of the peak we watched the sunset,
Mesmerized as a blending array of colors filled the horizon.
In a few moments it would vanish under the clouds as quickly as it came;
The perfect view.
Never in my life have I seen such beauty.
As the colors faded to darkness we huddled under blankets,
Watching millions of twinkling stars appear in a blackening sky.
In the tiny lens of the telescope galaxies, nebulas, and planets came alive;
The perfect view.
Never in my life have I been so amazed.
I now understand why the natives call this a sacred peak,
And what millions of people travel across the world to see.
Such color and beauty, so much darkness yet so much light;
The perfect view.
Never in my life shall I forget that night.
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