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Perfection


Frizzy ringlets of hair,

tamed into thick braids.

Slick hair,

down to your waist,

blowing everywhere.

Too-long bangs,

constantly pushed out of your face.

Loose curls

limp and beautiful.

 

Full lips,

coated in daily gloss or lipstick.

Thin ones,

bare and chapped.

Some mixture of both,

shining with ChapStick.

 

Dark skin

freckled with darker spots.

Tan skin, almost orange,

dotted with acne scars.

Pale skin

nearly transclucent,

sprinkled with small tan freckles.

 

Less than 100

Over 100

150

200

Whatever.

 

Perfection.

All of you.

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Hi there! Most of what I do has repetition in it. Like, a lot of repetition. I mostly write short horror/suspense stories, but I've recently taken a shine to dark poetry. I've also managed to orchestrate a full length novel, but it's still in the editing process. A long, long editing process.

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