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Phoenix


Once upon a time, I burned myself to ash. Once upon a time, I gave up on the things that made me. Once upon a time, I flickered in my past. Once upon a time, I rebuilt myself to what you now see. We rip and shred ourselves apart. Alone in the sea that boils us alive. But we can learn to swim. We can learn to mend our burns and hide our scars. From the ashes we can begin again. Becoming better than what once was. A cycle of flame and song and life. More than what we see we are. Phoenixes of our own tales. Legends in our own stories.
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Nightshade-444

“My breath is offensive to my wife, and I am loathsome to my own brothers” - Job 19:17 || Welcome to my page. I like to write about myself and the things I experience. If you don't like free verse, then I probably would stay FAAAAAARRRR away from here; it's my main type of poem.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal transformation journey with abstract universal messaging about resilience

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple interconnected ideas; steady progression from personal to universal

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Dark beginning resolves into hopeful, empowering conclusion about renewal

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Intense imagery and metaphors; dramatic arc from destruction to rebirth

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16 lines; falls within 16-30 range

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Rich phoenix/fire/ash metaphors; extensive ornamentation throughout

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Primarily lyric first-person shifting to collective 'we'; minor dramatic distance

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