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piping the "f" bomb


last poem i wrote dropping the "f " bomb, i started out by saying what the fuck right this time around i'll start off by just saying fuck there is more rampant shootings in nyc where one has to squat like a duck fuck too many women spitting out kids worse than a grown man asking his mom for a buck fuck people who dress and act dirty like a farm boy name huck fuck start making moves and stop asking for a miracle and luck fuck people still running away from a crime scene in a suv truck fuck individuals who are stagnant and comfortable remain to be stuck fuck did i still pipe more "f" bombs than the war of 1812? of course i did, fuck and its 2012
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet
appreciate your insight this poem was a part 2 to dropping the "f" bomb its an expression on what i feel and sense check out my other poems i wrote and upcoming pieces
jwiener
With this poem, you not only allude to one of your other poems, but you tell a story while keeping the same rhyme scheme throughout. I felt it almost read like a rap song. Great use of rhyme and rhythm.

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