Pitter, Patter, Bam, Splatter

You sit, you wonder

you listen, you ponder

you hope, you see

you dive, you cant sleep

it hurts, your in pain

it growls, here comes the rain

pitter, patter, bam, splatter

no noise, no sounds

no meat, zero pounds

you fight, you lose

black eyes, blue bruise

no power, no light

no heat, sacrifice

pitter, patter, bam, splatter

no noise, no sounds

one leap, no ground

good night

good faith

good riddance

another day

 

 

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