The Place
It took a long time to get there,
That place of contentment and greed.
I walked along the twisted trail;
I felt that I was free.
I lived among the others,
And I knew them all by name
They called out to me on the hillside,
I followed with slight delay.
I could feel Your eyes upon me
And how You told me to hesitate
I tried to follow Your guidance
But I was still urged to go the other way.
As I soon lost sight of the others,
I saw the sun breaking through the clouds,
The rays of light embraced me
And I knew what I had found.
I saw all of Your creations
Come alive with praise and awe.
They moved along with such harmony
And I knew like this, I could never fall.
You took away my resentment
You saved me from my pain
You released me from my entrapment in anger
And showed me everything that I had to gain.
I could see my life before me
And the task that was at hand
I placed my feet into the water
And let them sink in to the sand.
I then saw him next to me
The one who was from You
We walked together looking up
And felt the importance as it grew.
It took a long time to get there,
That place of significance and accord
And now we will go hand in hand
Walking on the edge of this world.
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