The Planets Gruesome Life
Thriving off their comrades dead corpses,
which are slowly turning into organic matter, in which gives them strength.
Little fingers fighting and fighting.
For the last drop of nutrients that they can get,beating of the weak
while they get strong
..slowing reaching the top while kicking dirt over the fallen
Dominant
Surviving
Powerful
Then SNAP
LIFE SOURCE IS CUT OFF
DEHYDRATED
STARTING TO WILT
DIE...
I understand that this poem is not very clear on the message but I really was talking about planets. But I was also trying to show how human nature is like this as well. We kick a man while he's down and step on his head to get to the top , then were cut down by someone else doing the exact same thing that we had do to the man before.
i hope you enjoy
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