a pleasant night

October 15, 2012

as i lay to rest i always remind myself that i am the best a night that is peace and quiet avoiding contamination of violence that spread like wildfire not hearing noisy sounds of cars screeching its tire not listening to people arguing over baseball i am above all that's why i stand tall all i can hear is angelic sounds of soft music that alleviates all tension people need to relax and grow old so they can collect their pension i lay down peacefully with no aggravation next day comes and all i do is save lives by using intervention

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MVP-Most Valuable PoetMar 29, 2013

having peace goes a long way believe me check out my poems and comment

ReinanenaMar 28, 2013

Peace that's me and where I am right now at this moment....

MVP-Most Valuable PoetOct 27, 2012

thanks 4 the support its about having inner peace despite all the negative energy that surrounds a person its about drive and ambition check out my other poems tell me what you think

Angelica2502Oct 27, 2012

I like this poem, reminds me that distractions don't matter... its about inner focus and what drives you.

MVP-Most Valuable PoetOct 25, 2012

thank you for the comment i'm always at peace with myself in life, it's important to stay in control this is a poem that reflects on what's happening daily check out my other poems-tell me what you think thanks 4 the love

ambercurry37Oct 25, 2012

As always, I love the way your poem flows. As I read it, I can almost hear your reciting with the right rhythm. You use good metaphors and I like the message behind it. Don't worry about what everyone else is stressed and fighting about, just be at peace with yourself and let all your troubles fade away.