a pleasant night

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

as i lay to rest
i always remind myself that i am the best
a night that is peace and quiet
avoiding contamination of violence that spread like wildfire
not hearing noisy sounds of cars screeching its tire
not listening to people arguing over baseball
i am above all
that's why i stand tall
all i can hear is angelic sounds of soft music that alleviates all tension
people need to relax and grow old so they can collect their pension
i lay down peacefully with no aggravation
next day comes and all i do is save lives by using intervention

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Comments

ambercurry37

As always, I love the way your poem flows. As I read it, I can almost hear your reciting with the right rhythm. You use good metaphors and I like the message behind it. Don't worry about what everyone else is stressed and fighting about, just be at peace with yourself and let all your troubles fade away.

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thank you for the comment
i'm always at peace with myself
in life, it's important to stay in control
this is a poem that reflects on what's happening daily
check out my other poems-tell me what you think
thanks 4 the love

Angelica2502

I like this poem, reminds me that distractions don't matter... its about inner focus and what drives you.

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thanks 4 the support
its about having inner peace despite all the negative energy that surrounds a person
its about drive and ambition

check out my other poems
tell me what you think

Reinanena

Peace that's me and where I am right now at this moment....

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having peace goes a long way believe me
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