Please God (Make It Stop)

by jarredshah

August 29, 2020

Please god make it stop;

All the hurting, the lying, the running.

Please god make it stop;

All the misery, the pain, the crying.

How many more days can I go on?

Please god make it stop;

All the sadness, the hiding, the madness.

How much more can a man take?

Please god make it stop,

Please god make it stop...

Maybe then I'll learn why I pray.

Please god make it stop,

Please god make it stop!

Jarred Shah

8/22/2020

4:35pm

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devoter786Aug 30, 2020

I like your poem, and the messsage you are trying to send is very relevant to our times right now. If you don't mind criticism, I think you can better your poem by adding more descriptions about your emotions, as emotions help the audience/reader visualize what the author is trying to say. Just my two cents!

devoter786Aug 30, 2020

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