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Pls pray for me

by muizz (Mark)

CC BY-NC
You do not need to be a specialist So you can cure someones burning chest Or to heal a final silent fighting fist But listen! to my suggesting request Do fold both your hands in prayer please though there's a chance you may not believe , you're unaware how much pain it'll release you unaware of the gift you may recieve You will become thee silent hero instead God may love you more than in comparison God may be waiting for your hands or head Yes he gift both of us his nature and horizon But this message is only because of his will Through my sore soul that needs a refill
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muizz (Mark)

Im a seventeen year old who had a passion for writing since the 4th grade I thought it was going to take me somewhere seeing that I was the only boy who couldn't play sports who was born with a soft soft voice and remains misunderstood I have spent my childhood trying to escape every comer of it yet still I have gotten nowhere I still have big dream like making children's dream come true and going to America

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Blends personal spiritual experience with abstract philosophical messaging about faith and healing.

SparseMeasureDense

Moderate idea density; prayer, healing, divine love, heroism woven across 13 lines.

DarkSentimentBright

Predominantly hopeful and uplifting; emphasizes healing, divine love, and redemption.

StillEnergyExplosive

Meditative tone with moments of urgency ('listen!'); mostly contemplative intensity.

MicroLengthEpic

13 lines falls in 7-15 range; shorter side of mid-length poems.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Uses metaphor (burning chest, silent hero), personification (God's gifts), some plain declarative statements.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric internal voice with direct address; minimal narrative or dramatic persona shift.

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