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by FindHer

Fix me, I swear I'm not crazy. Believe me, I can fix you if you listen. Cower before me, Megalomaniac with a dream, It seems that I can turn your fears into reality. Follow me, What could you do without me?
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Comments (3)

QV
<p><span style="font-size:16px;"><span style="font-family:times new roman,times,serif;">Charming work, full of emotional outpouring :) Q.V.</span></span></p>
T.A.Z.
Actually, the question that the poem was ended with is a question of finality. It's rhetorical and has no answer. Other than that, I agree wholeheartedly.
jwiener
This is a very well executed poem. The line "It seems that I can turn your fears into reality" has an eerie feel to it, and helps to give this poem multiple tones, which is a great skill for a poet to have. Also, leaving the poem open-ended with a question as the last line makes the reader want to find out more.

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