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A Poem for Him


The way he looks into my eyes,

When we touch I feel butterflies.

My heart sinks when we don't talk,

I really miss the way he walks.

 

I really miss the way you smile,

Felt like my heart was running miles.

I miss the way he used to hold me,

Felt like a teenager on the TV.

 

I want to know the feel of his lips,

Just the thought makes my mind do flips.

I think about him all the time,

He's the only thing that's on my mind.

 

I love the sound of his voice in my ear,

Wish I could lock it up as a souvenir.

I love our all day conversations,

Wish I couls give him confrontation.

 

About how much I feel for him,

His love sinks deep into my skin.

I miss you so much, so please come back,

Before my red, warm heart turns cold and black.

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Comments (2)

QV
<p>What a charming piece. I hope your feelings are returned in full :) A few suggestions, avoid cliches as much as possible to increase the geniune emotion(s) in the piece and try not to (though this is debatabe) from chaning POV from first person &quot;I&quot; to second person &quot;you&quot; (unless it is for effect and considering the audeince). Keep on writing. Q.V.</p>
alondra_pena
<p><img alt="heart" height="20" src="http://www.powerpoetry.org/sites/all/libraries/ckeditor/plugins/smiley/images/heart.gif" title="heart" width="20" />&nbsp;&nbsp;.I Loved It. &nbsp;&nbsp;<img alt="heart" height="20" src="http://www.powerpoetry.org/sites/all/libraries/ckeditor/plugins/smiley/images/heart.gif" title="heart" width="20" /></p>

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