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I feel empty
Bare
Invalidated
I let you look
And you told me what to do better
You told me it wasn’t about what I said it was
I’m sure you meant well, but it felt
Bad
Barbed
Armed with hurt
Unknowingly you took away my feelings
You took away my pain
I wish you had said something else
Anything
Or even nothing
If you had asked if I was okay
I probably would have said yes, but
It still would have meant the world to me
If you had been silent
I would have been writhing inside, but
At least it wouldn’t fill me with tears
Welling behind my eyes
Bursting at the seams
Holding it all together, because apparently
This isn’t what I think it is
And it isn’t real
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