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Positive mind


Stranded I am,  

On an island I am

It is all sand, water, and coconut paltms

and no signs of life

what a horrible sight.

But wait ! I broght something with me that is awesome indeed!

an optimistic view, suddenly I remember the good times.

And the water is clear and as blue as my ex's eyes, oh!, what a sight she was!

The sun smiles down and says what a positive mind I have.

The coconuts seem to laugh as they toast in the warm sun

and the clouds hover like floating marshmallows and I think to myself

what's better than a positive mind ?

Of all the things, I cannot live without my postivive mind for

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the rest of my life.

 

 

 

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