Positive mind
Stranded I am,
On an island I am
It is all sand, water, and coconut paltms
and no signs of life
what a horrible sight.
But wait ! I broght something with me that is awesome indeed!
an optimistic view, suddenly I remember the good times.
And the water is clear and as blue as my ex's eyes, oh!, what a sight she was!
The sun smiles down and says what a positive mind I have.
The coconuts seem to laugh as they toast in the warm sun
and the clouds hover like floating marshmallows and I think to myself
what's better than a positive mind ?
Of all the things, I cannot live without my postivive mind for
the rest of my life.
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