Pretty Bird

It was your wings, 

And the beautiful song you sing

That captured my attention. 

 

 

The way the sunlight glistened

in your eyes

It created a story that I could not escape

I was lost in it. 

 

My soul meshed with yours

Because you were searching for 

what I was

 

It was a connection I could not explain

Couldn't even anticipate

 

Tu olor

Tu risa

Era mia. 

 

Pajarito. Mio. 

Comments

upnorthdavid

Your smell, your smile, was mine.
Little bird. Mine

Great finish!

secretsleftbehind

Thank you!!

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