Pretty Girl
Prettydumbgirl
Watch her twirl
Sweet as a rose
Perfect little nose
Shes a slut, whore, insecure
What do we do this for?
She was wrapped in beautiful packaging
What does that mean?
A bow was placed on top of her
She was made for boys to see
To want
To take
She comes with a money back guarantee
She plays stupid, shuts her mouth
On the inside she seeths wondering if
someone can see her
For more than her face
For her waist
For her shut-up stand-up play-dumb facade
Each night she prays to God
Wondering if she will ever be
Valuedsmartgirl
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Largely personal/autobiographical critique of female objectification with abstract commentary.
Dense, rapid-fire ideas: objectification, packaging, silence, internal struggle compressed tightly.
Strongly negative: harsh language, despair, dehumanization, existential questioning throughout.
Sharp, staccato phrases; explosive accusatory tone; urgent internal turbulence.
Approximately 28 lines; falls in 16-30 range.
Strong metaphors (packaging, bow, money-back guarantee); simile (sweet as rose).
Pure lyric internal monologue; first-person consciousness examining self through others' eyes.
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