Promise again #4

March 13, 2018

Did you see it

In my eyes?

How five words

...or was it six…?

Made me the happiest

Girl

Happiest friend

In the whole

Wide

World?

Through five

...or six…

Words

I saw you fall in love

With you

Accept you

The way I have

So when I jumped

Into your arms

Just know

I was holding back

The sweetest

And saltiest

Of tears

Because you made me

Proud

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