Promises
At the start of life you promised
You gave to me a dream
Of guts and grime and glory
Of greatness' glitt'ring gleam
I walked down the road, believed you
My mind with visions filled
Of damsels rescued, dragons slain
My heart within me thrilled
As I came of age, I noticed
The promised glory fade
The distance increased, walls grew tall
While evil had it made
But still I walked your marked out path
I trusted in your word
Against my vicious demons strove
Your promises my lord
And with adulthood I realized
Your promises were lies
All the treasures I was seeking
But rotting flesh and flies
In that darkness long I wandered
Lost, searching for a light
And 'spite all else I treasured still
The hope of promise bright
Then marked by age I abandoned
All hope of promised dream
Thus into hell I entered in
The pit where despair teems
There I trusted nought but anger
Held hatred as my guide
Counted life a long, cruel road while
Your promise within cried
Now at the end I understand
Your promises were true
And once I looked with eyes of faith
I saw what my heart knew
That though the dragons seemed to win
Damsels to demons fall
A backward glance sees through the ash
Your promise conquered all
Dear child, you're at the start of life
Your future's shining bright
His whispered promise as your guide
Throughout life's dreadful night
Never give it up as I did
Although its hard to see
For though life's road is dark and dim
And all your demons seem to win
Though muscles tear and your bones break
And life from you all vict'ry takes
Here at the end you'll see it too
His promises are true
Jesus' promises are true
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