Promises

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77095
United States
29° 54' 38.9916" N, 95° 39' 22.7232" W

Departed now both soul and mind
Drifted through the wind like aged dust
Left alone to defend against a world
Consumed with hearts of withered rusts
Crumbled to pieces due to lost of love
Departure hits hard like violent gusts
Winds never wanted, nor expected
Leave life & love behind if you must
It's a past life you say you need forget
You promise your departure is right & just
But your promises mean nothing at all
Since you promised you'd never forget about us

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