Promises

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United States

Feeling forgotten and way out of line,

A cold, dead heart that has always been mine.

Fluid descriptions of love and lust,

A boy whose boy left him in the dust.

 

Breathing effortlessly but hardly alive;

Hoping, dreaming, and wanting to die.

Wrinkled paper like the promises I made,

And only one promise was broken today:

 

"Promise me that my words aren't pain,

Promise me that I am not a shame.

Promise me that you'll never leave,

And promise that you'll take care of me."

 

"I promise."

This poem is about: 
Me
My community
Our world

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