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Promises


Our eternal search where righteousness dwells. . .

our beloved God dwells only in You.

Yet our lifelong search for material knowledge

and pressing mortal longing to bring happiness

to all around us, satisfies the shallowness of our desires

that we believe will please You

in our spiritual search for saintly truths.

 

O Lord God, and we feel that we keep with You

as we gather each Sabbath and praise You on high,

Basking in the artificial, we pretend is Your light,

help us to put aside our materially glazed eyes

and like Zacchaeus, open our eyes to see;

teach us, help us to see others as You see them – with Love.

 

For a gift is not given if not given by Your Son,

and a promise is not a promise without a following action.

 

 

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rkcdlitt

I am a retired high school and college professor. The last 10 years of my teaching was as a college professor of literature and writing. I have self-published one book of prayers and meditations and am preparing another book of poetic odes to faith and love. I am truly honored to be welcomed into this group.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Philosophical/spiritual inquiry about divine truth versus material desire.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple interconnected ideas densely packed; layered spiritual concepts.

DarkSentimentBright

Reverent, hopeful tone with some self-criticism; predominantly positive spiritual yearning.

StillEnergyExplosive

Earnest supplication with meditative passages; varied intensity throughout.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 25 lines; fits 16-30 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Biblical allusion, some metaphor (glazed eyes, light); moderately ornamented.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric first-person plural voice; some dramatic address to God.

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