Promises
Our eternal search where righteousness dwells. . .
our beloved God dwells only in You.
Yet our lifelong search for material knowledge
and pressing mortal longing to bring happiness
to all around us, satisfies the shallowness of our desires
that we believe will please You
in our spiritual search for saintly truths.
O Lord God, and we feel that we keep with You
as we gather each Sabbath and praise You on high,
Basking in the artificial, we pretend is Your light,
help us to put aside our materially glazed eyes
and like Zacchaeus, open our eyes to see;
teach us, help us to see others as You see them – with Love.
For a gift is not given if not given by Your Son,
and a promise is not a promise without a following action.
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Philosophical/spiritual inquiry about divine truth versus material desire.
Multiple interconnected ideas densely packed; layered spiritual concepts.
Reverent, hopeful tone with some self-criticism; predominantly positive spiritual yearning.
Earnest supplication with meditative passages; varied intensity throughout.
Approximately 25 lines; fits 16-30 range.
Biblical allusion, some metaphor (glazed eyes, light); moderately ornamented.
Primarily lyric first-person plural voice; some dramatic address to God.
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