Pt.1
Hold me down,
hold me down by my sickness and desire
My weighted loss, proof of my past prevails
Woven through a tapestry named strife
You’ve cut the thread
But now, holding to my eye,
I see
Nothing has changed, and may I have hoped for this
But never prayed for it,
Dare I hide anything from God?
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