Queen (Pretty Girl Part 2)

This is part 2 of Pretty Girl, the poem about a girl I used to really like but never got the chance with her, although I don't have feelings for her anymore, I feel that these poems can be great for lovers out there. Without further ado, here's "Queen": Good Morning girl, it’s been awhile, 24 hours in fact, but it felt like24 days, I missed you but now I can see your beautiful face again. You lid me up once again with your unmatched beauty, nobody can take your looks and personality away from you. You’re unique in so many ways. The way you speak, the way you walk, the way you smile and sometimes it’s hard to believe that you love me because you look like a supermodel. You’re the type of girl that any guy would fall for but I would give my entire heart to you because that’s just how crazy you drive me. It’s a crazy that I like. The crazy that I am for you. You’re just magical. One day I want to travel the world, but I would love to travel it with you, I would love to take you to places you’ve never been to before. I wanna kiss your cheek as you’re smiling staring out the window of a jet plane looking down at the island we would chill at stare into the ocean and the sunset and watch the waves move in the wind as we sit in the sand while I hold your hand. I want to touch your soft face look you in the eye and tell you that I love you as your hair blows in the sea breeze, sometimes I wanna touch you in places that I really shouldn’t but it would all be because of my love for you sweetheart. Sometimes I feel like you fell from heaven because you shine so bright, when I see you everything around me is invisible, the only vision I see is a vision of an angel and that angel is you. I never want to let you go. You mean so much to me girl. What prince would I be without my lovely and astonishing lady? I’ve fallen onto a beautiful rainbow. Why am I on a rainbow? It’s all because of you and your rainbow is so clear, beautiful and bright that it takes my mind away. You say you love me. You’re obviously just trying to be nice. Consider me your friend, boyfriend or whatever the case may be but girl, you make my world go round and my heart pounds with joy when I see you and it never fails, so fall into my arms baby and I’ll show you that you are everything to me in this huge world.

Comments

marie

There is a lot of emotion in this poem, and that definitely comes through. It's a little difficult to read (given the formatting), but there are a lot of ideas here that can (and should) be expanded upon. It might be fun to try out different poetic schemes. Here are some good ones to check out: http://www.powerpoetry.org/writing-tips

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