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Quicksand


I find myself lost in you, your love is quicksand and I can't stand it.

Before I sink forever I love you a gifted queen,

who's intellect commands more respect then your body.

Hardly could this be your fault, it's me so go be free

and find someone better equipped for your caliber of woman.

My heart wasn't well protected and now it's broken.

Previous words spoken in love I feel ready to take back in hate

so you can equate the pain I feel.

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