PoemsBrowse PoemsSlamsFresh DropEchoes
LearnWriting TipsPoetry TermsPoets & ArtistsBooksFor Teachers
ExplorePoetry GenomePoem MapEchoesTake ActionGroups
AboutWrite a PoemDonateSign UpLog In
Free Verse

Quiet Motgher Weeps for Everyone


Quiet Mother Weeps For Everyone i White breath of stolen time, we drink your mornings, we drink your midday, we drink you when the crescent moon hangs her ashen halo in disorderly retreat. We drink you when the Med’s quiet tears recall that great rampart on the coast – rising from the siege of sea and ash. We drink your midnights in the crowning moment of choking air – when the star trap detonates like a fire genie emerging in a holy holo of magnesium. ii White breath of stolen time, a woman plays piano in a house in Tel Aviv. When it gets dark, she types: ‘Death is a Mistress from the Holy Land’ on her 1943 Olympia. She claims the keys shining above number 5 are lightening bolts preserving peace. She wears orthodox braids in the latest “Jerusalem” cut and calls to her Gazza flautists: play it in slow procession through the ruins of emptry time. Her eyes glow above the Lost City in the Desert. Her eyes glow white hot as peeling flesh. Her eyes glow as much as pain. iii White breath of stolen time, we bring you the house of music and words – we bring you a child anaesthetised on a stretcher. We bring you biopsy and amputation. We drink now to bring you stars (we once knew) glowing in veils of chemical goodbyes. We utter: Lento doloroso in the stolen garden as if notes weighed more than gravity.
©All Rights Reserved

Something wrong with this poem?

Share

Replies are closed for this poem.

This Poem's Voice

Your Poem's Voice

PersonalThemeAbstract

Blends personal (woman in Tel Aviv) with abstract suffering, displacement, time theft.

SparseMeasureDense

Dense layering of images, historical allusion, musical/medical metaphors per section.

DarkSentimentBright

Pervasive grief, loss, amputation, death, pain dominate throughout.

StillEnergyExplosive

Intense imagery (fire genie, star trap, peeling flesh) drives kinetic forward motion.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 28 lines across three sections; mid-length poem.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphors (breath as consumption), similes (eyes glow white hot), personification throughout.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric 'we' voice, shifts to narrative vignette of woman, maintains introspective distance.

How do we analyze poems? →

Artist Match

Comments (0)

No comments yet. Be the first to share your thoughts.

Log in to leave a comment.