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Rachel

by audrey.nguyen.16

There is this girl I know, she's blond, pretty And cool; I think she is so quite lovely. The height she has, makes all models jealous . The best feature, her smile, brighten, zealous and sweet, it makes many fellas go weep. To her “guy friend,” she is the one to keep. She is both smart and quite a lady like; Most of the time, that's what makes her unlike All the others who she's surrounded by. Even that we are not besties, but I Think that we are still some quite nice classmates. In class, I feel that we are like inmate.
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RebeccaYSPerez
<p>This poem has that secret crush feel and I think it is very sweet. The only thing I would say is the last line makes it feel a bit off. The whole poem you are talking about this girl, who&#39;s name I am assuming is Rachel since that is the title, but at the end the word inmate sort of gives it a trapped kind of feeling that takes away from the feelings you gained from reading the whole poem.</p><p>Otherwise, I think it was witty and cute and absolutely sweet. I&#39;m curious though. You said &quot;guy friend&quot; with quotations in the poem. What does that mean your feelings are towards her?</p><p>Becca.</p>

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