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Rag Doll

by Monsterxx4

Down the street  Her tattered shoes  Making a beat  Toot toot toot  Her simple dress  Her baby doll smile  I wish she could stay for a little while  She’s in the sky  While I’m here sighing  She was always so happy  But inside she was dying  And shes still smiling  Waiting for her rebirth  My little rag doll Has left this earth  Her tattered shoes  Making a beat  Toot toot toot  Her simple dress  Her baby doll smile  I wish she could stay for a little while  She’s in the sky  While I’m here sighing  She was always so happy  But inside she was dying  And shes still smiling  Waiting for her rebirth  My little rag doll Has left this earth 
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Comments (4)

jwiener
You are very welcome. You are an amazing poet. Keep writing!
Monsterxx4
Thank you so much for this feedback. Im actually not used to getting feedback so I'm really excited about this and I'm glad you like it.
jwiener
Rhythm and repetition make this poem very strong- I really liked the "toot toot toot" line, because I could actually hear the sound in my head, and it made the writing very powerful.
Monsterxx4
Inspired by a song. :)

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