Rain

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57769
United States
44° 14' 24.522" N, 103° 17' 52.0296" W

I look out the window
the sky is dark
a sudden flash of light
piercing the sky
a cluster of thunder
makes me jump
I step outside
I stand in the yard staring around the rain starts to dance around me
I spin around
getting dizzier every turn
falling to my back
I close my eyes
stretching out my body
I hear the grass whispering I see the stars twinkling
I open my mouth to catch the rain
I nothing and everything all at once
it’s like the inside of me is shooting off fireworks
it’s like pure joy
I realize that it’s happiness that I feel
pure and complete happiness

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