Rapunzel Remade
Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair
Rapunzel, Rapunzel, why do you stay in your lair?
Don’t you see there is a whole world out there?
While you sit and wait
Time passes by
Any more sitting-
And you'll be far too late
Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair
I wish you could see
I wish you were aware
This opportunity is so rare-
To travel, to explore
Do you even dare?
Leaving your lair takes a risk
It requires effort
Unlike a wish
The safety of the lair
Might even be missed
But it’s worth it, I swear
Go see what’s out there
And no matter what, no matter where,
Always remember to let down your hair
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