Rated 4 out of ten
Proverbs 15:11 New English Translation (NET Bible)
11 Death and Destruction are before the Lord—
how much more the hearts of humans!
Four out of ten ...
Rated four do I need more
than just appreciation?
On the bottom floor is an open door
to communicate my designation.
Circles here and circles there
nothing but limitations.
Reaching so far but not up to par
how to reach that destination?
My goals high and expectations low
with the company's motivation.
It wants more not like before
but to understand their elevation?
Sincerity high so I like to try
misunderstanding's aggravation.
Sincere but wrong now an endless song
the end misspells frustration.
Some progress made like a clean slate
not really for success on probation?
Only limited by a vision on trial
and human nature's acclamation.
Changes without a substantiating doubt
knowing inner man's proclamation.
It cannot change unless God proclaims
that change without limitations.
Jan Wienen
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