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RAVEN


RAVEN 

Lost , hurt so cut up  
Puzzled the way my life has been  
I had been gazing out my bedroom  
Window thinking about the hurt  
Of what Dark Angel gave . 

I looked and what did I see and ''Raven'', 
Looking back at me , 
His eyes so little like a spark shining in 
That cold darken sky , 

His beaded yellow eyes had been looking me  
Up and down , 
I pondered over and over in my mind , 
What did the ''Raven'' see when it was looking  
Back at me ! 

Did it see all the pains that was in my eyes ? 
The cuts of the night that had been cut in  
Deep wounds of Dark Angels knife , 
From my bleeding heart that is all over my 
Bedroom floor . 

Did the ''Raven'' See the same story of he  
When he was looking at me ! 


Lilly Emery (c)

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Poetic Judy Lilly Emery

To all my readers you may see that their are grammar errors in my old writings, but these writing are from the 90's ,2000's. I truly didn't think anyone was readying my work . so I just started writing out what I felt and made my pains a story and poems . I had re post these poems and stories all over the internet and I keep them also in file so no one can ever say my work is theirs . I have kept my work as they are just for others to see where it was I started my writing at . The pains are so real not even a game ,The life I had lived I would never wish upon no one . I like to say to all who are taking the steps for change in their life congratulations to the new open doors God bless you . You may have seen my photos on the internet and my writings on Poetry.com and poem hunter etc. you may have seen the hate that others have given to me about my work and my beauty of who I am . But as you can see I will never let the haters Stop me from doing what I love . So I say the same to all of you write your own words and let your heart speak to all your readers . I hope you can understand why I haven't made changes in my work at less not the old ones . My old work are left as they are for me to always remember where it all came from . God bless to all who reads . Lilly Emery /Judy Emery

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