Reaching for hope

November 2, 2012

When life is getting hard You try your best to keep up But you find yourself falling Then when you open your eye's to find yourself in darkness You hear some people calling your name When you turn their they are Friends and family waiting for you They all reach out their hand's Bringing you out of the darkness Bringing you into the light

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The poetry that I write all come from my heart my soul their about things i've been though. I can't share my feelings with people by talking so I write poetry. I now have a loving mom who saved me from a life time of felling unloved so i own her everything she tells me that I should keep writing poetry that i'm good at it. All my friends tell me i'm good at writing poetry but i don't feel like I am. But i feel like I still need to share it I put my heart and soul in to it so I hope everyone likes them and if you don't i'm sorry about that.

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josetheg2350Jul 25, 2013

<div>Life goes by;</div><div>People you meet</div><div>Things you do </div><div>The way you act</div><div> </div><div>Life goes by; </div><div>When you meet someone </div><div>When you do things </div><div>The reason's you act </div><div> </div><div>Life goes by; </div><div>While life goes on </div><div>People leave things behind</div><div>People forget memories</div><div>People create precious things </div><div>People create legacies </div>