The real

September 3, 2012

I've always prayed to be a captain Never thinking That I'd be swimming in the ocean The shore ain't clear Sometimes I get tired of all the coasting It's the waves Through out the years You sit and wonder are they ever gonna stop I need a chance and I ain't looking for no yacht I'm looking for my moms And I'm looking for my pops I'm searching for my friends I love you all I'll see you at the end

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TalkinBoutToneSep 4, 2012

Thanx for the support Im new to this, this is my second poem that I've put up

hnmullSep 4, 2012

I love it.

TalkinBoutToneSep 3, 2012

The best must be recognized don't Let me go unheard Peace

TalkinBoutToneSep 3, 2012

I was in my zone it took me about 7 minutes I'm hoping its liked Much love to those that read and write