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Recovery


Fall to the floor on my knees metaphorically I might disrespect someone But I ask this rhetorically: What can you do when you realize you need help because you’re too weak to do anything yourself? Can’t think straight Stuck in a loop; A self-destructive figure eight I can't be the only one that feels this way. Cracking under the pressure Choosing between pain and pleasure After all this time, this is all I have to say: I realize I have to become the person I want someone to be to me Because truthfully, I'm making myself sick I need to be An inspiration, a motivation. For lacking drive leads to devastation Why hate on yourself when everyone else can do it for you? I am on a road to recovery and redemption I go bravely. For this is the path I have chosen to walk.
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<p><span style="font-family:comic sans ms,cursive;">:) Thank you for your feedback and constructive criticism. </span></p><p><span style="font-family:comic sans ms,cursive;">Seeing this made my day a lot better. &nbsp;Things have been rough lately.</span></p><p><span style="font-family:comic sans ms,cursive;">However, I&#39;m always trying to become a better person.</span></p><p><span style="font-family:comic sans ms,cursive;">-Thanks</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);">After all this time, this is all I have to say:</span><br style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);" /><span style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);">I realize I have to become</span><br style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);" /><span style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);">the person I want someone to be to me</span><br style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);" /><span style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);">Because truthfully, I&#39;m making myself sick</span><br style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);" /><span style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);">I need to be</span><br style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);" /><span style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);">An inspiration, a motivation.</span><br style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);" /><span style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px; background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239);">For lacking drive leads to devastation</span></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p><span style="background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239); color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px;">those lines caught my attention-apply this to yourself-this is a motivation to be greater</span></p><p><span style="background-color: rgb(239, 239, 239); color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px;">great job</span></p>

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