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The Red Flower


She planted beautiful flowers 
All with different colors and different names
They all had different needs non e were the same
She took as much care of them as she could 
She watered them and loved them 
She always said they were ugly and they weren't growing but they still looked beautiful to me
Except one flower 
That flower looked beautiful to her 
She loved that flower more that the rest
And yet it look like it was dying to me 
It had beautiful leaves and vibrant red petals 
And yet it still looked sad to me 
Eventually she stopped watering the flower
She thought that since it was so beautiful it didn't need to be watered
As she watered the other plants she looked on sadly 
She always wondered why she wouldn't water it
The flower always thought she never loved her as much as she loved the others
It was so sad that the women she loved so much didn't lover her back
The flower gloomily looked on as the world passed by
Everyone stopped and said how beautiful it was 
They all talked about how vibrant it was
They all talked about how the petals looked like shiny candy 
They all asked her how she got that flower to look so beautiful 
She always replied humble 
She said that it was just luck 
But the flower was sad
They didn't feel loved by all the people that passed by
The flower didn't want attention from everyone else 
They just wanted attention from her
The flower started to slowly die on the inside 
The petals still looked beautiful and vibrant 
But it was never vibrant on the inside
She continued to not water it
She stopped paying attention to the flower
Except for the occasional stop to admire its beauty 
As the petals turned brown and started to shrivel up everyone asked what happened 
She always said she didn't know 
She watered it as much as she could 
She took extra care of that flower
She had been ignoring 
And yet it was still dying
It was too late the flower died before she could save it 
She never realized how bad the flower was
She never realized the beautiful flower she held so dearly was dying 
She mourned over it wondering what she did wrong
She spent everyday watering the other flowers looking at the empty hole in the ground where the flower used to be wondering what went wrong and worried that the other flowers would die too 
But they didn't all the the other flowers grew beautifully 
They were all more vibrant and beautiful than the flower that she mourned 
They were the best flowers she had ever grew
She figured it was because she took more care of them then she did before
She started to take time out of her busy day to water them and to spend time with them
But really the reason the flowers grew so wonderfully was because of the flower that died
Even after it died it's soul was still in the dark brown soil
She was still looking after all the plants and her
The flower never wanted her to be sad again 
The flower always had loved her even when she didn't water her 
She fed the other flowers when she couldn't 
She made sure the other flowers were nourished 
Those flowers eventually died once winter came along again 
And when spring came  she planted new ones with new soil 
She started to take even more care of these flower
Determined to grow beautiful, thriving, and vibrant flowers
But they quickly died 
She mourned over those flowers wondering how the others grew so beautifully and these died so quickly 
It was because she had moved on 
She planted new flowers with new soil forgetting about the old ones 
After that she never thought about that little red flower again 
But the flower always thought about her even after she threw it out 
Always hoping it could be planted again
So she could see her once more
 
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