The Red Flower
She planted beautiful flowers
All with different colors and different names
They all had different needs non e were the same
She took as much care of them as she could
She watered them and loved them
She always said they were ugly and they weren't growing but they still looked beautiful to me
Except one flower
That flower looked beautiful to her
She loved that flower more that the rest
And yet it look like it was dying to me
It had beautiful leaves and vibrant red petals
And yet it still looked sad to me
Eventually she stopped watering the flower
She thought that since it was so beautiful it didn't need to be watered
As she watered the other plants she looked on sadly
She always wondered why she wouldn't water it
The flower always thought she never loved her as much as she loved the others
It was so sad that the women she loved so much didn't lover her back
The flower gloomily looked on as the world passed by
Everyone stopped and said how beautiful it was
They all talked about how vibrant it was
They all talked about how the petals looked like shiny candy
They all asked her how she got that flower to look so beautiful
She always replied humble
She said that it was just luck
But the flower was sad
They didn't feel loved by all the people that passed by
The flower didn't want attention from everyone else
They just wanted attention from her
The flower started to slowly die on the inside
The petals still looked beautiful and vibrant
But it was never vibrant on the inside
She continued to not water it
She stopped paying attention to the flower
Except for the occasional stop to admire its beauty
As the petals turned brown and started to shrivel up everyone asked what happened
She always said she didn't know
She watered it as much as she could
She took extra care of that flower
She had been ignoring
And yet it was still dying
It was too late the flower died before she could save it
She never realized how bad the flower was
She never realized the beautiful flower she held so dearly was dying
She mourned over it wondering what she did wrong
She spent everyday watering the other flowers looking at the empty hole in the ground where the flower used to be wondering what went wrong and worried that the other flowers would die too
But they didn't all the the other flowers grew beautifully
They were all more vibrant and beautiful than the flower that she mourned
They were the best flowers she had ever grew
She figured it was because she took more care of them then she did before
She started to take time out of her busy day to water them and to spend time with them
But really the reason the flowers grew so wonderfully was because of the flower that died
Even after it died it's soul was still in the dark brown soil
She was still looking after all the plants and her
The flower never wanted her to be sad again
The flower always had loved her even when she didn't water her
She fed the other flowers when she couldn't
She made sure the other flowers were nourished
Those flowers eventually died once winter came along again
And when spring came she planted new ones with new soil
She started to take even more care of these flower
Determined to grow beautiful, thriving, and vibrant flowers
But they quickly died
She mourned over those flowers wondering how the others grew so beautifully and these died so quickly
It was because she had moved on
She planted new flowers with new soil forgetting about the old ones
After that she never thought about that little red flower again
But the flower always thought about her even after she threw it out
Always hoping it could be planted again
So she could see her once more
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