Red Handed
His hands are calloused and torn,
browned by the sun as always but
now they are stained red with blood
Silent, he grips
the butt of his rifle with one hand
and a dirty cloth with the other
Twisting, wiping, polishing,
checking the chamber,
cleaning the barrel
The forest is an aquarium tank,
tinged blue with filtered light
and alive with swaying trees and creatures that scurry
"What have you done?" I ask him
as he sits admiring the gleaming steel,
hands still red
He startles and looks at me—
holding up his prize, he says
"I've cleaned my rifle."
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