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The Remedy Is What You're Addicted To


 

 My mind still replays the memories 
 fading away like cigarette smoke 
 like addiction, i keep craving for more 
 even when i knew it was killing me
 
 You're no good for me
 You're the source of all this
 But you're also the remedy
 Sweet, unreachable ecstasy
 
 Tell me who you want 
 Tell me who you need 
 Tell me who you love 
 And tell me it's me 
 
 I remember the start, the during and the end 
 Everything is haunting me, reminding me of you 
 Because all roads lead to rome 
 And you're the empire 
 
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal romantic obsession; autobiographical heartbreak narrative

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple layered ideas: addiction, contradiction, longing, inevitability compressed densely

DarkSentimentBright

Melancholic, painful desire; toxic relationship dynamics; despair and helplessness

StillEnergyExplosive

Repetitive imperatives, urgent questioning, intense emotional turbulence throughout

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 21-22 lines; falls in mid-range 16-30 category

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich similes, metaphor (empire/rome), personification (haunting); ornamented language

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; direct address but introspective; no narrative persona shift

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