Response to the 18th Sonnet
Shall I compare thee to a winter's night?
Your icy embrace colder than the polar caps.
No mercy is shown when you rob the light,
leaving no warmth to find in your traps.
Look left-look right. Not a soul to be seen.
All life hidden, seeking comfort and protection.
Even the moonlight can't make my delusioned eyes keen,
and your glare, a wind chill, strikes with surprise affliction.
When will the sun rise?
How I long for the slightest ray.
This luminous absence won't be my demise
for here comes the break of day.
A radiant horizon dawns, this misery ends.
I am ready for the next chill that dusk sends
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