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Revived


My heart beat is so suttle.
But when ever I see you.
My heart rate goes up like a space shuttle.
Feeling like I had just been saved from death. 
I must thank you for your help.
Even though my heart beats quietly. 
It’s such a tragedy. 
Not knowing how to feel. 
Makes my mind and body feel ill.
With you it feels like a chase.
Or even a race with high stakes.

 

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