Rewritten
It was not her too-long pauses,
her anemic crumbling crescendos,
or even the last languid notes of her requiem.
I could not find it in the cadence
beneath her breast,
nor the adagio of her lungs.
I knew my harmonies;
knew every melodic tendon
raised beneath her pallid epidermis.
And then I passed the coda.
Dissonance and a tremolo.
I had been rewritten;
Through-composed.
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