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Rewritten


It was not her too-long pauses,

her anemic crumbling crescendos,

or even the last languid notes of her requiem.

 

I could not find it in the cadence

beneath her breast,

nor the adagio of her lungs.

 

I knew my harmonies;

knew every melodic tendon

raised beneath her pallid epidermis.

And then I passed the coda.

 

Dissonance and a tremolo.

I had been rewritten;

Through-composed.

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