In the Ring
I hate when you tell me
have a good evening
it feels so impersonal
and too proper
like we haven't been talking for weeks
and you really are 10 years older.
It's like you're moving backwards
while I'm trying to push harder
It's not even worth the effort
but I'm still training myself
on not giving up on you.
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