The Rise of the Perfectionist
In this state of depression
Caused by a world that demands perfection
It has become easier to concentrate greatly on one’s flaws
Sadness covering the face of one’s happiness
And the rejection being plowed in the subconscious parts of their minds
Shattering hopes
And tearing dreams
As esteem lowers into the dark pits of misery
Being banished away by those of ‘greater perfection’
To ‘that place’ where only flaws exist
For ‘that place’ only subsists in their minds
As unacceptance grows raving through broken hearts
While hatred roves in the mind leaving every bend and angle untouched,
There seems to be no sign for upliftment of self-image
With imperfections preventing foresights of burning desires
With only the optimism of a chance.
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