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River of Life

by Skam2221

Powerful streams take you as their willing victim Stay above water
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<p>this is catchy</p><p>but is missing something</p><p>it needs a body in this poem that captivates the readers</p><p>i would add more stanzas or verses to really juice up this poem</p><p>the 1st two lines grab my attention and then it ends</p><p>add more lines to it</p>
Skam2221
A haiku that fell into my head on a lazy Saturday afternoon.

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